Come on sarah and bob lets play on my mini car that i got for christmas *ZOOM* three kids bob, larry and sarah is riding fastly down the street “wait we’re going to hit the tree” sarah yelled “wait no i’m going to let go” bob said larry:GASP. BOOM CRASH *blackout *ambulance sirens “they’re injured need some backup” they brutally died.”ok the movie is over” jack said “mum that was a cool movie” larry said THE NEXT MORNING “sarah, bob lets play on my mini car i got for christmas.
Wow what an interesting narrative TJ! I like how you've used sound effects "zoom, boom and crash" if your story. It also leaves you wanting to know more! May we can work on editing our writing next time in class. Well done
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